Getting Lost

Aug 31, 2017 23:23
Today I got lost in Kumamoto University.

I'm often confused about the direction I'm heading when I go to a new land.

In the university, I watched a map made of paper, thought like "okay, I understand the route," and started walking.

However, the destination was in the completely opposite direction.

Recently I may depend on Google Map too much.

There are many places where Google Map doesn't work, such as premises of universities or underground, I think that I have to do practice to be able read paper maps.

Anyway, I will be careful not to get lost in my life.
迷子

今日、私は熊本大学で迷子になりました。

新しい土地では、今どちらを向いているかよくわからなくなります。

紙の地図を見て、「よし、こっちだ」と歩いていったら、目的地は正反対の方向でした。

最近私は、Google Mapに頼りすぎているかもしれません。

大学のキャンパス内や地下など、Google Mapが使えない場所はまだまだ多いので、地図を読む練習をしたほうが良さそうです。

人生の迷子にはならないように、気をつけます。
No. 1 Mac's correction
  • Today I got lost in Kumamoto University.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • I'm often confused about the direction I'm heading when I go to a new land.
  • I'm often confused about the direction I'm heading when I go to a new land.
     "a new land" sounds like an entirely new part of the world, rather than a different part of Japan. It sounds like well used hyperbole, however, so I left it.
  • In the university, I watched a map made of paper, thought like "okay, I understand the route," and started walking.
  • In the university, I looked at a map made of paper, thought like "okay, I understand the route," and started walking.
     "watching" means more like looking at something moving and seeing what it does
  • However, the destination was in the completely opposite direction.
  • However, my destination was in the completely opposite direction.
  • Recently I may depend on Google Map too much.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • There are many places where Google Map doesn't work, such as premises of universities or underground, I think that I have to do practice to be able read paper maps.
  • There are many places where Google Map doesn't work, such as premises of universities or underground, I think that I have to do practice to be able reading paper maps.
     "practice" is just it's own verb in English
  • Anyway, I will be careful not to get lost in my life.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
Toru
Thank you very much for correcting my post! :)
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